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Check this out. I just wrote it:

(similar to "No One At the Bridge")

No One On the Field

Soon to lose consciousness
The ball glove grips my hand
This guy is pitching violently
Cheered by shrieking fans
The sun blurs my vision
The ball goes by so fast
Save my team from losing
I lie helpless on the grass

Remembering when first I held
The ball in my own hands
I threw a pitch so eagerly
And hit a dozen fans
But now the air?s too heavy
And I just don?t understand
Why must my team desert me
When I need an ambulance?

Call out due to nosebleed
And there?s no one there to heal
Shout out for a runner
But there?s no one there to steal
Cry out suffocation
For the time to go is near
Scream out desperation, but
None I know is here

thats hilarious Ak , good work, i think

heheheheh..like it AK

Thanks.

Let's see what you have. Come play with me.

AK, this is great. You need to do more and post them here for us to enjoy!

I shall do that.

Good job, AK! I love it! Keep em coming!

I'm working on a "Bastille Day" parody. It'll be about misheard lyrics (lemony cake). I'll post it here when I'm done.

Here it is:

I swear you said "lemony cake"
Sing it right for goodness sake
You have played this many nights
Have you ever sung it right

Oh, they're going to play "Bastille Day"
So let us see if he can sing this song
Teleprompters, they would help a lot
The words of Neil should never be sung wrong

Can't believe it, shame on you
Couldn't seem to get it through
You should bow your head in shame
The words you sing are not the same

They're about to play "Bastille Day"
Another chance to sing it nice and clear
Sing o' Rush fans, show him how it's done
Just look at Neil, he can't believe his ears

Many times you've played this song
You have practiced for so long
Guide your vocals with the verse
Since you make it sound much worse

Now that they have played "Bastille Day"
To no surprise he messed it up again
Play the echoes of his own own mistake
He's been doing this since God knows when

The words of Neil should never be sung wrong

Can't believe it, shame on you
Couldn't seem to get it through
You should bow your head in shame
The words you sing are not the same

Yes!